03: You Will Dream…
No melody
No complete lyrics.
But a beautiful chance to co-write… with YOU!
Fill in the blanks…
The sun has fallen, sinking deep.
The world is falling fast asleep.
Close your eyes & you will dream
Of waterfalls & bubbly streams.The night is waiting, blanketing
with subtle hues and coloring.
If you sleep now, you will dream
of fireflies and dancing trees.Tomorrow bears the weight of day
but night is light with shades of gray.
If you rest, then you will dream
of fairy tales and (1)——-We sleep to chase the world away
when nothing brings us (2)——-
The day is better when you dream
of (3)—— and (4)——–
of fairytales and AWESOMENESS
when nothing brings us COFFEE
of LOVE and BROMANCE
…my work here is done.
dood…
You’re fired.
Epic F-A-I-L
Stick with photography… No more songwriting for you!
i know you’re just intimidated by my rad songwriting skills.
you’ll come around…
(and don’t come back… ya hear!?)
(insert door slamming shut. in. your. face.)
haha.
i think we just hijacked your post.
(sorry. that might’ve been a little mean.)
Hi.
Ryanne can come back.
Ok.
Bye.
hahahahahahahaha
hahahahaha!
soo, i was going to share…but now i’m scared to leave my lyrics…WOW!?!
NO NO NO!
We need some seriousness here.
Puh-LEEZE!
1. fields of green
2. when life is only disarray (changed the whole line, sorry)
3. of heaven’s grace unforseen
I don’t know if you can use that at all, but it was fun. I like doing lyrics.
1. if you rest, the you will dream
of fairy tales and blowing leaves
2. we sleep to chase the world away
when nothing brings us sweet dismay
3&4. the day i sbetter when you dream
of mountains high and valleys green
should have proof read…”then”…”is better”…sorry
oooohhhh…
good stuff y’all. with our without the proofreading.
1. Clotted cream
2. Tammy Faye
3. B.A. Baracus
4. the A-Team
rock on sweet mama.
i just love it when a plan comes together!
I’m more of a MacGyver girl, but whatever… Now the A-Team has taken over my blog.
Think I got a better idea.
Go to iTube or YouTunes.
Type: “UTFO Fairtytale Lover”
The draft you’ve written so far just kind of sounded like a “this-myth-is-true” song.
drew’s idea is full of win.
Nor: Roxanne Roxanne! haha. yeah. That’s much more fun to listen to.
Josh: Didn’t I fire you? And you’re back?! Oh the audacity.
Saw ‘em on Soul Train.
I had a dream about MacGyver last night. So weird you should bring him up. I was in Japan watching the sun come up and the phrase “land of the rising sun” kept popping in my head and I got a chat message from MacGyver because at one time we had been good buds.
Well, he was in charge of the Phoenix Foundation now and he had a very important mission for me in Japan. I never found out what it was because I had to pee so bad and I woke up after several attempts to find a bathroom in Japan that didn’t cost 50 cents to use it.
Just thought you’d like to know that.
(Now an entire report about a MacGyver dream!? Why do I get the feeling that I’m not being taken seriously as an artist?)
Um…do you REALLY want an answer to that…?
I DO have one, you know. I just leave it in my head for safe-keeping. With, you know, other things.
you started it.
No. 2, the whole line: when nothing here bids us to stay
S: Thank you! A good suggestion from a great friend.
1) when i think of “fairytale” i think of “kings and queens”
2) hmmm, just not feeling that line.
3) what has been and what could be. (doesnt really go with your theme tho.)
im stumped.
my creative juices have all oozed out.
(but i love how this sounds like a grown-up lullaby)
Tomorrow bears the weight of day
but night is light with shades of gray.
If you rest, then you will dream
of fairy tales and “knights of old”
We sleep to chase the world away
when nothing brings us “hope or peace” (hope or rest)
The day is better when you dream
of “harlequins and golden threads” – (I want to use “dancing queens”, but you already used dancing in the second verse “dancing trees”)
http://www.rhymezone.com/
I assume you know about this already, but it helps me out a lot when I can’t think of just the right word…and it’s not cheating
1. If you rest, then you will dream
of fairy tales and better days.
2.3.4. We sleep to chase the world away
when nothing brings us joy
The day is better when you dream
of Christ and His great love
^^ Don’t ask why i was up at 4AM, i’m a strange kid
1 – princes true
2 – a sunshine ray
3 – strawberries
4- cream